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Ross Mitchell Tuesday, April 21, 2009 10:05 AM Proposal Presentation Review Reviewer: Logan Williams 102-136 EMPIRICAL Purpose slide; this is implicit CONCEPTUAL Purpose slide METHODOLOGICAL Not sure PRACTICAL not sure; this was better addressed in answer to Kim's question "what's your story" when you discussed "ethical engineers" OVERVIEW Background slide; also initial overview slide NEW KNOWLEDGE purpose slide HOW Methodology slide; good you already have contacts at King's college DATA TYPES USA case; UK case yes no; ran out of time literature slide; you explained this pretty well try to use less 'ahs' Good use of agenda to start presentation Use less word on each slide Too much policy detail/focus on what you will do I like Nancy's suggestion of explaining "what could be?"
 * 1. Did the presentation clearly describe the aims of the research – empirical, conceptual, methodological and practical?**
 * 2. Did the presentation provide an overview of what we already know about the research subject, and then explain how the proposed research will create new knowledge?**
 * 3. Did the presentation provide a robust sense of** //**how**// **the research will be carried out, and of the type of data that will be collected?**
 * 4. Did the research plan presented seem credible and feasible?**
 * 5. Did the presentation provide a tangible sense of the book and other outcomes of the research?**
 * 6. Did the presentation persuade you that the proposed research is important, in this historical moment in particular?**
 * 7. Was the speaking style clear, engaging and well timed?**
 * 8. Further comments and questions.**