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Thomas Solley STSH 4980-01 Senior Thesis Costelloe-Kuehn 9/23/2014

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__Memo 15 -- Thesis Proposal -- Peer Review -- Brooke Ruggiero__ Comments and feedback provided in-document via Foxit Reader.

This is a strong start to your Thesis work. Aside from grammatical mistakes and suggestions, however, I felt that some sections of your content could perhaps have been phrased in a more formal manner -- suggestion only, as a scientifically- and peer-reviewed report. The content is good, the guiding social and research-questions match well towards fulfilling the proposed study -- overall, well done.