LamprouCommentWilliamsMemo26-30

Memo 26 Ok, your abstract needs your research questions. You describe well the issue and you know the theory. In a few, you know your subject of research. A brief outline for abstracts: You introduce the issue. You can have some literature background here. You then introduce the questions. Then you say how you are going to answer them and how your project will contribute to STS literature, or why it is important. Ned’s question, you know. Afterwards even if you have no idea what you are going to find you say something that you strongly believe it will be the outcome. Memo 27 I like the way you presented your Dr. I think you make the point. Memo 28 I really like the way you write Logan. Its like I am watching a movie. I don’t understand although the neoliberal side. Is it because of the ISO? Memo 29 Very nice. So the practice is oriented to a patient. Interesting shift from your other descriptions. You describe so well? Were did you find the names. Amazing! Memo 30 Great description once again. And good analytic point. I totally agree.