WilliamsCommentPPTBartonJen

Barton, Jennifer Tuesday, April 28, 2009 10:00 AM Proposal Presentation Review Reviewer: Logan Williams Time: 10:04 - 10:17; 10:18 - EMPIRICAL Covered in research questions; media important; story telling important CONCEPTUAL Covered in research questions? METHODOLOGICAL Good slide on groups you will interview PRACTICAL ??? OVERVIEW MTR slide; The current moment slide NEW KNOWLEDGE the current moment slide HOW Participant observation; interviews and a third one that I missed DATA TYPES Activist organizations; storytellers; residents; industry; government Yes; methodology slide; you described how the different data types allow you to access different types of knowledge; cool next steps; new momentum in movement not captured by current research questions v1; you will revise very engaging; Research questions v.2 slide; q2 which talks about new media production and translations/stories…. This could easily incorporate your discussions of place that you had in v1 of research questions (I'm guessing you know this already but just in case) Media figures very largely in your new research questions; neat
 * 1. Did the presentation clearly describe the aims of the research – empirical, conceptual, methodological and practical?**
 * 2. Did the presentation provide an overview of what we already know about the research subject, and then explain how the proposed research will create new knowledge?**
 * 3. Did the presentation provide a robust sense of** //**how**// **the research will be carried out, and of the type of data that will be collected?**
 * 4. Did the research plan presented seem credible and feasible?**
 * 5. Did the presentation provide a tangible sense of the book and other outcomes of the research?**
 * 6. Did the presentation persuade you that the proposed research is important, in this historical moment in particular?**
 * 7. Was the speaking style clear, engaging and well timed?**
 * 8. Further comments and questions.**