onya+Comments+on+Jon+Memo

As a first semester student, I do not suppose myself eligible to make comments on other student’s works so please excuse me if I make some improper comments. As an employee who has worked in Water Company for more than 6 years, I do believe that water in some areas of the world is a political issue as water wars between Middle Eastern countries will prove this fact. In many occasions, despite of water shortages and the increasing need of promoting the culture of water consumption among consumers, authorities do not alarm the population just because of preventing political tensions in the country as my professional experiences showed this fact so I do agree with your bias that “ management of water resources is an imperative for human survival in an advanced technological age” the fact which has been forgotten in most Middle Eastern countries so it might be useful to mention to water wars in “why now “column. Most committees of UN might be good funders of your project for example if you are going to review the political economy of Asia and pacific, UNESCAP is a good source of financial aid. On “Data sets” column I did not get with whom you are interesting to interview, so I think it is better to explain “ Semi-structured interviews” more in this section.
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