LamprouCommentLyons

Proposal Presentation Review

Presenter: Jessica Lyons Reviewer: Anna Lamprou

Yes I think her presentation was clear on methodological and conceptual aims. As for the empirical and practical I am not so sure. Yes, Jess knows her study object/subject very well. There is little academic work on this issue so new knowledge about natural sciences. Yes, its more of a historical research. Yes, although too many questions and the researcher should chose the ones she wants to answer at her dissertation. Otherwise I think they are too many. Yes, I think her book will be a big success. It is important in general at this historical moment I don't know. Yes, very good. Nice conclusion with the recipe!!!
 * 1. Did the presentation clearly describe the aims of the research – empirical, conceptual, methodological and practical? **
 * 2. Did the presentation provide an overview of what we already know about the research subject, and then explain how the proposed research will create new knowledge? **
 * 3. Did the presentation provide a robust sense of //how// the research will be carried out, and of the type of data that will be collected? **
 * 4. Did the research plan presented seem credible and feasible? **
 * 5. Did the presentation provide a tangible sense of the book and other outcomes of the research? **
 * 6. Did the presentation persuade you that the proposed research is important, in this historical moment in particular? **
 * 7. Was the speaking style clear, engaging and well timed? **
 * 8. Further comments and questions. **