Proposal+Peer+Review+for+Thomas+Solley



We talked about your proposal. Once again, I very much like your project, just try to make it consistent with both itself and the template format and check for spelling & grammar errors. Also, I couldn't find the right words for what I was trying to say when we met, but I think I know now: take out as much unnecessary text as possible (without losing your "voice" of course). Your project has a lot of great potential and cutting out the "fluff" will make that even more obvious.