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Thomas Solley STSH 4980-01 Senior Thesis Costelloe-Kuehn 9/23/2014

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__ Memo 15 -- Thesis Proposal -- Peer Review -- Greg "X" Niguidula __ Comments and feedback provided via MSWord. Please view under "View track changes: All markup."

I had very little to contribute to this paper, aside from a few small comments here and there. The content is excellent -- I can clearly see that you've already put a lot of time and effort into this thesis and Topic. Research questions are well-chosen and demonstrate the thinking behind the author's intent, as well as clearly linking back to the social questions posed. Tone is maintained well throughout the paper. I look forward to seeing the completed product!