LM+Feedback+for+Dan's+Proposal


 * The title reflects the specific focus as well as the overarching research topic.
 * The abstract is very lengthy – Is it possible to shorten the abstract, and include most of this information in the overview? Right now, your abstract reads kind of like an overview. Maybe just flesh out the third paragraph and use that as your abstract?
 * The overview contains detailed descriptions of the aims. I think you could include more about the large-scale importance of the project, however, beyond the stove movement.
 * Do we need to include the chapters in the Dissemination section? I like that you did this, but I’m not sure if it fits under this section of the proposal.